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     Hidden in a corner,
 Everything is dark. 

          I see the world around me,
 But never taking part. 
       
          My friends just overlook it,
I don't think they can see,
          The thing inside,
That is killing me.
     
          It tears at my heart and soul,
Eating me alive.

         Sometimes I'm just wishing,
That I could just die.

          I want someone to notice,
See that I am here.

          To hold me close and tell me,
That they really care.

          Everyone's so wrapped up in the life,
That all they see is their own.

          I want them to see that I am sitting here,
Confused and so alone.

          I want someone to help me,
But no one seems to care.

          I'm wasting my life on wishing,
That I was never here.

          The pain inside is cutting me,
Like a thousand pieces of glass.
 
           Driving deeper into my heart,
When I think about the past.

           I'm tired of looking in the past,
But the future doesn't seem to real.

For I will always be,

An Invisible Girls.
    
Invisible girl is how I feel -_-
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Mandy-Jo Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well me and my friend (she is also on this) but me and her have gone through the same thing that have turned are lifes upside down, we talk and I share my poems and all with her so I do get to talk to someone
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SnappedWires Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
People can't see the invisible. If you really want them to see and care, you'll need to get their attention.
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Mandy-Jo Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know I have tried but it never works I asked my mom and she didn't really care
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SnappedWires Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
That must hurt...

Did you ask anyone other than her?
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Mandy-Jo Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well I pray to god every night, I talk to my dad that's it really, just will get better as time passes
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fairytailkawa Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student General Artist
I hope it does...
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Mandy-Jo Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you for the tips and other stuff
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fairytailkawa Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student General Artist
This is true, but sometimes the people in your life don't seem to care, but find the few people in your life that actually care and care for them equally since they might be feeling the same
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SnappedWires Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
Fair enough.

I swear I have an "invisible" friend who behaves exactly like that.
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fairytailkawa Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student General Artist
I have a few, and lately I've noticed that me and my friends are invisible to most people but not to each other. But that's what I believe in, you don't need a lot of friends, you just need a few who truly care.
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